Alliteration galore

Just finished another short story. I wrote it as an entry for a radio competition, so it has ample alliteration to give it a nice reading-out-loud quality. I read a bunch of medieval alliterative poetry before starting, but none of it filtered through to the final product (at least, not that I noticed). Anyway, I'm very pleased with it!

Off to hand in my coupons and collect the traditional prize for completing a short story. I can only imagine what I'll get when I finish the novel - does Absolut Raspberri come in Jeroboams?

:)